本文是一篇议论文, 文中第一段描述了大学生毕业之际面临对未来的选择, 列举数种意向作为背景, 引出主题“ 我的抉择”, 例证真实, 论点明确, 思路严谨。学习本文应多临摹其思路以及语言表达。
Upon graduating from the university, every student is faced with a big, practical problem, thatis, to make a choice for his/her future career. However, the choice varies from pe rson to person. Some students want to find jobs in joint ventures, desiring to earn more money. Many arepreparing for entering the gr aduate school, so they work hard to pass the entranceexamination. Also, there are unambitious ones who are indifferent to the choice of career andthink that any kind of job will satisfy their desire. Only a small number of students are at a losswhat to choose. As to me, I am determined to further my studies abroad and I am fullysupported by my parents.
I have many reasons for my choice. T he fundamental one is that in a developed country I canenrich my mind with most advanced profes sional knowledge in my speciality. I believe thatthe more I learn, the better equipped I will be with modern knowledge, and the more probablyI will succeed in my pursuit. Some people suggest that I work while studying. Well, that mightbe a good idea. However, I would like to see more of the world when I am young, and I thinkthree or four years' study will undoubtedly benefit my whole life. In addition, I am sure that Iwill certainly have more opportunities to get a satisfactory job in future with the profoundknowledge I learn in graduate school abroad.
本文是一篇议论文。文中第一段论述了自信的定义; 第二段从正反两方面论述自信的重要性; 最后一段是结论。本文中复合句运用较多, 用词也很考究。下面提供的写作思路以及所用的词语和表达都值得很好学习。
Confidence, in a broad sense, comprises self-trust, self-esteem, courage and indomitability. This definition, though somewhat vague and unsubstantial, can be appreciated throughexperience because in our lifetime, we are always seeking to achieve something successful andare always longing to attain a glorious goal, which can only be reached with the spirit of self-confidence.
As is known, self-confidence is accompanied by will, and that as a twin, offers hope. Those whodo not have a strong will often think themselves unable to carry out any thorny tasks, whilethose who have do not find the tas ks unsurmountably difficult. In fact, when our heart is voidof selfconfidence, every hope is gone, every thing on which we put our hands seems to be veiledin dark. For instance, according to experts, every year in the entrance examinations of all kinds, fully-prepared candidates lose nearly 5% to 10% of the full scores, and consequently meettheir Water loo simply because they underestimate their own abilities on the one hand, andover estimate possible difficulties on the other. As a result, their fear to meet new challengeleads to helpless ness in the examination.
Self-confidence can be regained (if you have ever lost it) by building faith in your self. True, whatever you do, you will encounter hardships. But success will come to you if you arecourageous enough to strive for it. If you are not, failure might be your life-companion.
1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2.If we read the book, we would learn a lot.
3.We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we've learned a lot.
4.As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we've learned a lot.由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。
5.The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.
6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.
7.The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.
8.Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。